Monday, 2 September 2019

My visit to the eels.

Swiftly,
 lurking below tranquil waters.
 Rope tugging,
 every so often.
 Earthy smells from,
 All directions.
 A nippy touch of coldness,
As the water flows softly.
Long dark shadow emerges,
From way down deep.

By Kaelyn




On the 27 of August Room 4 went to the Hustlers to see the long fin eels. We saw 4 big eels and we fed them fresh venison with our hands. We got back to school and were wrote about them. I wrote a free verse poem.

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